Today was the formative at Moving Brands. I felt quite confident and sure of what i was doing and our presentation. The feedback we got was incredible and very very accurate I can definitely see how we can improve and move forward.
Brian's feedback;
"Very well presented. “artist is a very layered person”
Great start. Layering and collage great. Beginning a brand identity nice. “Cheeky little logo” not shown properly. - needs to be on slide on its own. Video mood board excellent and based squarely on artist and his social media profile. However needs more work. Installation (Micael Murphy) great. Handing out objects is good presentation theatre. Sharing where you intend to go next was very good, but a bit confusing.
Insight represented extremely well. Congratulations
Criticism: Collage can be cluttered. You need to major on his identity / outcome coming out from from the collage. So more clarity. great idea though."
Moving Brand's and Rob's feedback;
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